Solid poem. I enjoyed the self reflection and especially the line, “How could I believe I owned you, as random as a five dollar bill.” It was very powerful by showing the severity of the possessive relationship.
There is both that sense of letting go, wanting to be forgiven emotional expressions that I enjoy. “If you love something, let it go” powerful line
Thank you so much
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